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Welcome to my blog, where I ramble on about writing, the bizarre world of m/m romance, and anything else that happens to grab hold of my attention and refuse to let go.

Regular weekly posts:

Update Monday: My weekly update on my work and real life. Now includes a “snog of the week” picture, because looking at pictures of men kissing is my favourite way to start the working week ;)

Wordy Wednesday: a rotating “opinion piece” blog post

  • Tropes on Trial: First Wednesday of the month

Where I gently poke fun at a popular m/m romance trope to see if it can defend itself.

  • Writerly Ramblings: Second Wednesday of the month

Musings on writing – because it’s good to share things that have been helpful.

  • Transatlantic Translations: Third Wednesday of the month

Come marvel at the eccentricities of the British as I poke around at one of our cultural stereotypes. Or alternatively, I might pull apart one of those thorny transatlantic differences in culture or language that can trip up the unwary m/m romance reader or writer.

  • Amazing Authors: Fourth Wednesday of the month

I’ll be inviting an m/m author whose work I admire to come and share. It could be a guest blog post, an excerpt from their new release, an interview, or possibly all three!

30th May: Clare London
27th June: Lou Harper

On the rare occasion that there are five Wednesdays in a month, I’ll think up something extra special for the extra week :)

Guest Thursdays

As of 10th May 2012 I’ll be having a guest blogger over every Thursday, to blog about anything they think you might be interested in. Email me if you’re interested in being added to the schedule – authors, bloggers and readers all equally welcome.

Free Fic Friday

I’m currently writing an m/m sci-fi romance called Storm and Lightning, to be published in weekly installments. Click the category for it at the end of the post to see all posts so far.

Vintage Smut Sunday

Because I adore vintage porn and have been collecting it wherever I can. I’ll be sharing a few of my favourite drawings or photographs each week. As always, silly captions and stories inspired by the pictures are very welcome.

Use the links below to navigate to all the posts in a particular category:

Storm and Lightning – week thirteen

Storm and Lightning began on the 13th January. Catch up here: week one, week two, week three, week four, week five, week six, week seven, week eight, week nine, week ten, week eleven, week twelve

On a mining colony planet a long way from Earth, bandit Jedd Lightning dreams of making enough money to get off the planet for good. When a robbery at a high-class brothel goes wrong, he meets gorgeous rentboy Storm and is instantly smitten. But Storm has a few surprises up his sleeve, and when Jedd helps him escape, he realises he might have taken on more than he can handle…

JL Merrow and Lou Harper are once again my fabulous beta readers – any remaining mistakes are my own.

But now, on with the story: Continue reading

Guest post: Sense of Place: Setting in romance and why it matters by Violetta Vane and Heidi Belleau

Heart shaped world

Violetta:

As new authors, we were thrilled to receive our first ever review—a highly positive one—at the Dear Author blog. Even more thrilling, the reviewer highlighted something were very proud of: “The sense of time and place in this short story is amazingly authentic.”

That was for our free short story, “Harm Reduction,” which spans twenty years but stays within the same New York City block. It’s an area and an era I happen to know well. New York City was my home in the early 1990s, and I made a tenuous living at a strange assortment of jobs while migrating between an SRO on the Upper West Side, a warehouse-loft in the Brooklyn Navy Yards and a squat house on the Lower East Side. So when we set the story in the Lower East side, I had sense memories to draw on, as well as the feel of the era.

The US was in a recession. But social opportunities, at least, were beginning to open up, now that the repressive conservatism of the Reagan-Bush years was waning. And HIV/AIDS prevention policy was a huge beneficiary of that movement. Imagine the entire healthcare system in this country being legally prevented from saying that condoms could help stop the transmission of HIV! That was how it used to be, and why “Silence=Death” became the slogan of activists who fought for change.

We don’t mention these politics. But they’re still in the story indirectly, because our characters are very much products of their time, and one of them (Julio) is actively trying to change that time. He combines careful analysis with intense passion; he’s aware of what’s wrong in the world, and aware that a single person can’t fix it all… but he still tries.

If we didn’t spend so much time imagining and reimagining the setting, that passion wouldn’t be as grounded or real. Each character in a romance has to have a passion burning within themselves… otherwise, how can they feel it for each other?

Heidi:

Another awesome compliment we received on that story was someone who, tagging the book for their goodreads shelves, tagged it with ‘city-as-character’, which is really a fantastic way of putting it. In any given story, setting can easily just serve as a quiet, inconspicuous backdrop, or even be completely absent, leaving your characters living and loving in some kind of creepy white box. But as a consumer of media, one of the things some of my favourite romances do is bring setting to the forefront and make it integral to the story, as much a ‘character’ as the hero/hero/heroine or combination thereof.

For example, there’s a whole pile of time travel romances out there, but what would Outlander be without Scotland? Wuthering Heights without moors? Many stories live or die by the authenticity, appeal, or inherent romantic-ness of their settings.

One of my favourite guilty-pleasure movies is PS, I Love You. The story of a deceased husband gently helping his significant other through her grief is a pretty universal concept and could be set anywhere, but what that movie magically does is soak itself in Irish-ness from start to finish. Of course, if you asked my Irish husband about its portrayal of Ireland he’d balk from start to finish, but as a romance, you fall in love with Ireland just as much as you fall in love with Gerry, if not more, since Gerry is, himself, a part of Ireland, from his (oh so terrible, Gerard Butler!) accent to his music to the pub he drinks in to his choice in boxers.

I wanted to capture that same feeling when we wrote The Druid Stone, without writing some thatched-roof house fantasy version of Ireland. We hope our readers fall in love with something a little more grounded in reality, because ultimately the reality is just as romantic, economic troubles aside. So the first thing we did was start off with a character who doesn’t fall for the Ireland homecoming mythos—a man who, in fact, has significant reason to be especially resistant to Ireland’s charms.

Just like a good romance requires conflict between the main characters, The Druid Stone has conflict between character and setting. Sean’s background allows him (and thus our audience) to see Ireland more for what it is than what we often imagine it to be, which makes his love affair with the setting all the more enjoyable when he finally opens up to it. Ireland isn’t a perfect country, not by a long stretch ( nor is Sean’s Irish love interest, druid-for-hire Cormac Kelly), but there’s a definite reason for its significant emotional appeal in our cultural consciousness, and not tapping into that would be an absolute waste of a setting. We’re hoping that setting, and our dedication to portraying it as more than a postcard, will really set The Druid Stone apart.

Violetta:

The Druid Stone won’t be out from Carina until August, but we have a prequel story coming out this week that’s just as much about Sean’s complicated relationship to place.  Sean comes from a mixed family, but he’s not confused at all about what he is: he identifies first and foremost as Cuban-American. His confusion has to do with where— with a sense of feeling out of place and not belonging. At the stage of his life he’s at in “Cruce de Caminos”, he doesn’t feel at home anywhere… until he wanders into New Orleans.

The city represents a sense of history, a rootedness, that he longs for. “Cruce de Caminos” isn’t a romance, though. Sean isn’t ready for that yet. The passion New Orleans stirs up won’t be fulfilled, and the central question of the story is not whether he can find love, but whether or not he can even change his own tragically wasted young life. Like the blurb says, the city brings him to his knees.

Heidi:

But in defeat, or worship?

Of course, sense of place doesn’t have to be a complicated, conflicting thing. For Ori and Kalani in Hawaiian Gothic, their relationship with their home is like one between mother and sons. Hawai’i is a lifegiver and a caretaker and a beautiful, welcoming place, and every single setting across the islands is written to evoke that perfect feeling of knowing that you are where you belong. And when you’ve had a life as difficult and heartbreaking as Ori and Kalani’s, having something you can count on like that may save your life.

Violetta:

We’ve both been to Hawai’i, and our own passion for the place is woven through the story. We also love writing about places we’ve never been, however. Our free short story coming out for the Love is Always Write event is set almost entirely in Finland, 1941. Some of the descriptions of extreme cold came naturally to Heidi, but otherwise, we knew very little about the setting at the onset. We researched like crazy, and by the end of it, we’d fallen in love with the place through the eyes of our characters.

Heidi:

Your turn! Tell us, what are your favourite romantic settings? Any books that really “get” a particular setting or really take advantage of it? Any settings you’d like to see more of?

About Heidi and Violetta:

Heidi Belleau and Violetta Vane are two unlikely friends and co-writers from different sides of the same continent. Heidi, from Northern Canada, is a history geek with a soft spot for Highlanders and Victorian pornography. Violetta is a Yank (and a Southerner, and a Japanese-American) with a cinematic imagination and a faintly checkered past. Together, they write strange and soulful interracial and multicultural m/m with a global sensibility and the occasional paranormal twist.

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About “Cruce de Caminos”, out May 21st from Riptide Publishing

Addiction drives Sean O’Hara to a critical crossroads. Will he make the right decision, or will the floodwaters bound for New Orleans sweep him away?

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About Hawaiian Gothic, out June 12th from Loose Id

Childhood friends Ori and Kalani sort through dark family history and even journey to the Hawaiian ghostworld for a second chance at love.

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Links to free stories at Heidis blog

Transatlantic Translations: British weather

Us Brits are apparently mocked the world over for our strange obsession with the weather, so I thought I’d dip into this one a little further. Yes, I’m going to admit it – I too am obsessed with the weather. Partly this is because I love gardening so I need to know what’s going to be happening weather-wise when it comes to planning garden tasks. But mostly it’s because of that daily decision of “what am I going to wear today?”

Take today as a case in point: when I walked Daisy to school it was mild and sunny with no wind. I didn’t wear a coat for a pleasant change, but opted for shoes with long socks as it still seemed a little nippy for sandals. By the time I got home my feet were roasting. Now though, a few hours later and a chill wind has got up. It’s okay when the sun shines and you’re in a sheltered spot, but if you’re somewhere exposed and the sun goes behind a cloud, it’s bloody freezing. What the hell do you wear when you go out on days like this?

The answer: lots of layers. And make sure you take a big bag to put your layers in if it heats up. You might even need to go the fashion disaster route of socks with sandals! Not attractive, but very practical in weather like this. NB – Jo would like to add that she has never worn socks with sandals… Well, okay, maybe once, but she was camping so it’s allowed.

There is good reason why our climate is one of the most unpredictable in the world. We are positioned on the boundary between two climate cells of cold polar air and warm tropical air. Add in the maritime influence of all that wet air off the Atlantic, and the complications of the jet stream right above us unpredictably mixing all the different fronts of air – well, is it any wonder we get a surprise every morning when we look out of the window?

There are many ways this unpredictable weather impacts on us as a nation, for instance, our favourite topic of conversation. The weather is our cast-iron small talk subject – it will always work when striking up conversations with strangers. What’s more, with a climate like ours it isn’t ever boring. Well, okay, maybe a bit boring, but a damn sight better than my father-in-law’s favourite topic of the congestion on the motorways.

I also think our national character is a response to this crazy weather. We go on stoically planning outdoor events in the summer, only to see at least half of them blighted by rain. You have to be able to laugh or you’d be miserable half the time. On the other hand, we do like to make the best of sunny days, so you get all kinds of impromptu barbeques and people baring their skin at the slightest ray of sunshine – you have to make the most of it as it might be all you get for weeks!

Personally, I love the unpredictability of the British climate (daily wardrobe hassles aside). All that rain is what makes our country so green and lush, and I own a super-sexy rainbow-coloured umbrella which is always a pleasure to use. Since moving out to the West Country, which is even more unpredictable than other parts of the British Isles, I’ve seen countless rainbows in the sky – ephemeral visions which bring joy to my heart every time.

So, fellow Brits, what do you make of our weather? Are you obsessed and do you think we have good reason to be? And what about those of you from the rest of the world: would you swap your climate for the British one: wet and mild with all kinds of freakish floods, storms, cold snaps and heatwaves to keep us on our toes?

 

Update Monday: now with added snogging!

Snog of the Week

Yes, I decided my weekly updates needed a little something extra to illustrate them, so now you’ll be able to enjoy a picture of men snogging to begin your working weeks. Just what I need to get me in the mood for writing!

Writing:

Last week I wrote Dragon Dance – my late submission for the UK Meet anthology. Let’s hope the rest of the team like it enough to include it – this isn’t a foregone conclusion! I also got back to writing Storm and Lightning and my regular Wednesday blog post. Didn’t manage a Vintage Smut Sunday, but I definitely will this week.

Other than that, I’m really not sure where my week went. I think I’m still catching up on everything after the move, plus sorting things out behind the scenes for the anthology.

I did find out my short story, The Wrong Side of the Glass, has been accepted for Xcite’s Bad Boys gay erotica anthology, coming out in August, so that’s good to hear!

Real life:

I’m making headway on battling down the big pile of unpacked boxes. Last week I worked on clearing out most of the stuff that had been dumped straight from our old loft into our new garage. A lot of it is fabric stuff, and it all smells musty so I’m having to run the washing machine constantly. I will get the conservatory cleared of boxes before the weekend, though – it’s good to have goals!

The weather over the weekend was beautiful, so I spent lots of time enjoying the new garden with Daisy. We also found her scooter at the back of the garage and took it out onto the road outside. We’re on a little private road that doesn’t ever get used as a rat run, so it’s really safe for her to practice on. I love living here!

The only thing I don’t like about my new garden is the bindweed infestation. Ugh! I’ve battled with the stuff before on allotments, and it’s almost impossible to get rid of. Ah well, at least it will keep me out there, paying attention to everything so I can stay on top of it.

This week:

I have my first round of edits on The Hot Floor to complete, plus I’ll be editing stories for the Lashings of Sauce anthology and planning a revamp of the website. I don’t think I’ll be doing much in the way of new writing, but I’ll definitely be busy!

ETA: watch out for a fascinating guest post from authors Violetta Vane and Heidi Belleau this Thursday.

Storm and Lightning – week twelve

Storm and Lightning began on the 13th January. Catch up here: week one, week two, week three, week four, week five, week six, week seven, week eight, week nine, week ten, week eleven

On a mining colony planet a long way from Earth, bandit Jedd Lightning dreams of making enough money to get off the planet for good. When a robbery at a high-class brothel goes wrong, he meets gorgeous rentboy Storm and is instantly smitten. But Storm has a few surprises up his sleeve, and when Jedd helps him escape, he realises he might have taken on more than he can handle…

JL Merrow and Lou Harper are once again my fabulous beta readers – any remaining mistakes are my own.

But now, on with the story: Continue reading

Guest blog: Fairy Tales by Anna Mayle

I was recently asked to explain the genre of Fairy Tales. There really is no set definition though. They don’t need to have anything to do with the Fae, in fact most don’t. They come from all over the world through oral and written traditions and many have been told and retold so many times that they are nothing like the original. The only general connections I could find are that they all tend to be short stories with fantastical characters and events that are difficult to mistake as probable, and though they usually have some moral or meaning behind them they aren’t as pointed or quite as short as fables.

As the world gets smaller and people communicate more regularly with those in other countries, our pool of stories grows deeper and deeper. Every country has at least one. The most well-known Fairy Tales in my region of the world come from the Brothers Grimm and Hans Christian Anderson, probably because many have been used in modern media, although I can assure you the little mermaid did not get her man, and Cinderella’s step sisters didn’t look half as funny trying on the glass slipper in the original as they did in Disney…there was a lot more blood in the first version. Sadly the most well-known Fairy Tales are also the least well known for that very reason. People have sugar coated them until Fairy Tales have come to be known as children’s stories, warping them into happy endings. I assure you, most didn’t begin that way.  If you would like some examples, here is a link to the top 10 gruesome Fairy Tale origins: http://listverse.com/2009/01/06/9-gruesome-fairy-tale-origins/

In recent years there seems to have been a trend back toward the original darkness in these stories. Movies like The Brothers Grimm (2005), Black Swan (2010), and Red Riding Hood (2011) while they don’t follow the Fairy Tales themselves, definitely take steps back toward capturing the adult nature of the genre.  Even more than the recapturing of old stories, we’re seeing new tales as well. I’ve come across them mostly in comic books for example, Vögelein: Clockwork Faerie (2003) is a comic book about a clockwork doll whose guardian dies, she is left seeking someone she can trust to wind her. She is afraid if she winds down, when they wind her again she’ll only be a toy.

I’m not sure if my books would count as Fairy Tales or not.

You’re welcome to give them a read and decide for yourself ^_^, here’s my latest.

Daybreak for a Stolen Child

Nearly a year since the nightmare at the cabin. Life for Daniel and Leinad hasn’t gotten easier, but at least there is something to say for familiarity. They fight, they threaten, but they love each other and in the end, that should be enough.

It isn’t.

When the shadows start stealing closer, and the past begins catching up to them, how long will the two lovers have before the Fae in Daniel emerges, and before Leinad has to face his own demons once again? Until the harsh light of reality engulfs the fragile world they’ve built for themselves?

How long will it be until daybreak?

Can you think of some modern movies or books that would count as a Fairy Tale?

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Guest blog: Bonking, Grunts and Grinders by JL Merrow

Like many pastimes, mountain biking has a terminology all of its own.  And oh, what fun for the writer discovering this fresh seam of innuendo-ripe jargon!

Take bonking… You probably already know the British slang meaning of the verb “to bonk”

Small Bridesmaid: What’s bonking?
Scarlett: Well, it’s kinda like table tennis, only with slightly smaller balls.

-                  Four Weddings and a Funeral

But in mountain biking, it has quite a different meaning:

Expression used by cyclists to describe exercise induced low blood sugar levels; being a feeling of light-headedness and weakness in all limbs. Similar to ‘The Wall’ in running. – Urban Dictionary

Here’s Tim’s introduction to the term in Hard Tail, shortly after he’s been drafted in to manage his injured brother’s bike shop:

“I was about to close the magazine when a title caught my eye: What Really Happens During Bonking. I did a double-take and looked around furtively, wondering for a moment if one of the porno mags had slipped inside this issue… I still sniggered as I read the article, with its useful tips on how to avoid a bonk.”

Poor Tim. He could probably have done with that advice during his ill-fated marriage to Kate!

Here’s a couple of other terms that may (or may not) be of use:

Grunt: a very difficult climb

Grinder: a long uphill climb

Condom:  the little plastic or rubber thing that protects your tube’s valve stem from rim damage

Nipple:  the nut at the end of a spoke that nobody knows the real name for.

crotch-testing: sudden impact between a male rider’s private parts and something very hard and pointy, such as a handlebar stem or seat.

And, of course, Hard tail: a bike with front suspension but no rear suspension.

Obviously. ;)

Definitions courtesy of the entertainingly-written Dictionary of Mountain Bike Slang.

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Mountain biking can’t be the only sport/pastime with slightly dodgy jargon!

Do any of you have the sort of hobby where, if you talk about it in public, you get funny looks – even if what you’re saying is entirely innocent?

All commenters will be entered into a draw for winner’s choice of an e-book from my backlist, PLUS a gift certificate for $25 from Amazon (or the e-book retailer of your choice). The more blog tour posts you comment on, the more chances you get!  See my website here for full itinerary.

Finding love can be a bumpy ride.

His job: downsized out of existence. His marriage: dead in the water. It doesn’t take a lot of arm twisting for Tim Knight to agree to get out of London and take over his injured brother’s mountain bike shop for a while. A few weeks in Southampton is a welcome break from the wreck his life has become, even though he feels like a fish out of water in this brave new world of outdoor sports and unfamiliar technical jargon.

The young man who falls—literally—through the door of the shop brings everything into sharp, unexpected focus. Tim barely accepts he’s even in the closet until his attraction to Matt Berridge pulls him close enough to touch the doorknob.

There’s only one problem with the loveable klutz: his bullying boyfriend. Tim is convinced Steve is the cause of the bruises that Matt blows off as part of his risky sport. But rising to the defense of the man he’s beginning to love means coming to terms with who he is—in public—in a battle not even his black belt prepared him to fight. Until now.

Product Warnings: Contains an out-and-proud klutz, a closeted, karate-loving accountant—and a cat who thinks it’s all about him. Watch for a cameo appearance from the Pricks and Pragmatism lovers. May inspire yearnings for fresh air, exercise, and a fit, tanned bike mechanic of your very own.

Hard Tail is available from Samhain Publishing at a reduced price for a limited time only.

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Guest blogging starts today!

To celebrate I have two writers sharing their thoughts with you. First up, at midday (GMT+1) my good friend JL Merrow is calling by as part of her Hard Tail blog tour. Then, at 2pm, new-to-me author Anna Mayle is sharing her thoughts on Fairy Tales and promoting her latest book, Daybreak for a Stolen Child. She has some beautiful pictures to illustrate her post. Anyone using a John Bauer illustration gets top marks in my book, because I grew up reading a book of Swedish fairy tales :)

I hope you’ll all show my guests your support and join in the conversation by leaving your comments. Anyone else who wants to guest blog here, just send me an email and I’ll book you in.

josephine.myles5@gmail.com

We have a blog tour winner!

Congratulations to Bookwyrm369, who was chosen by the random number generator out of the 147 comments during the Handle with Care blog tour (that total doesn’t include my replies to comments)

I’ll be in contact for details of where to send your prize :D

Thank you so much to everyone who stopped by and shared their thoughts and book recommendations with me. I have a whole stack of books now on my “to buy” list – as if I needed any more!

And as a commiseration prize to the rest of you, here’s a cute picture of some boys kissing ;)

From first to final draft – my editing process


Back in March I wrote a post about how I now approach my first drafts, and a couple of people asked me about how I then shape my extremely rough first drafts into the polished gems worthy of submitting to publishers.

Here then, is a step-by-step guide to my drafting process–I might sometimes compress some of the steps if I’m in a hurry, or add an extra one if I’ve had to make substantial changes during the process, but this is my ideal and involves a grand total of four drafts. There is no right or wrong way to draft a story, and your methods may vary, but I’m presenting this here in the hope there might be something useful for someone out there :)

Leave it alone!

I always leave my story alone for at least a week – preferably longer – before looking at it again. This isn’t hard to do because by the end of the first draft I’m usually feeling burnt out and want a break. However, soon enough the story calls to me again…

Scribble all over it

I always print out my first drafts on paper. Yes, I know I could read through them on my Kindle and make notes there, but I find paper and pencil to be freeing. On my first read through of the first draft I am merciless. I’m looking for flab to cut out of the story. I’m looking for the bits I neglected to write properly because I was so caught up in the flow. I’m looking at the overall story arc and the pacing. I’m looking for inconsistencies and accidentally dropped sub plots. I try to keep this first read through fairly fast, so I get a sense of the pacing. I don’t have time to look at the nitty-gritty of word choice and typos – although I usually pick a few of the worst offenders up while going through.

When I open up my document again to cut, reshuffle and add those extra scenes, I go through the whole story again. This time I do try to catch the clunky sentences, clichés and typos, but I don’t run a full spell check at this stage.

Get a second opinion

Once I’ve finished going through the document I have my second draft complete. This is the one I send off to my beta readers. It isn’t perfect just yet, but what I’m looking for from them isn’t proofreading, but their reactions to the story. I want to know if there are things that confuse them, if they understand the characters’ motivations. If they even like the characters. Sometimes I give my beta readers specific questions about the story I’d like to know their opinion on, but not always.

I always try to make sure I have at least two beta readers (one of whom is American and on the alert for anything too confusing for US readers), but I prefer there to be more. I also like to have at least one male beta on the team, although this isn’t always possible. Barging In had a grand total of eight beta readers for the entire book, and several more who gave feedback on just the first few chapters.

The Post-it stage

While I’m waiting for feedback from my beta readers, I enter into what I call the “Post-it” stage. This is when I’m constantly thinking about the story and remembering things that I’d meant to add but never quite got around to. I keep pads of Post-its and pencils at strategic places around the house and make sure I jot these down whenever they occur. Then I either stick them to my printed draft in the right place, or to a separate piece of paper. I take great pleasure in peeling them off and screwing them up when they’ve been dealt with :)

Pulling it all together

When the comments from betas come in I read them all then, and ponder any recurring criticisms. Do I need to write any new scenes or make any major changes? Handle with Care needed some major work at this stage, but other stories have required less.

Once I’ve decided roughly what needs doing I’ll read through the whole manuscript again (possibly on my Kindle this time, although I’ll print it if the changes are substantial), and make notes on all the things that need altering. I then go through the manuscript chapter by chapter with all my betas’ feedback to hand–all open on my desktop so I can click through them one after another. When I’ve finished, I’m at the third draft stage.

Finishing polish

What I should have now is a story that’s in pretty good shape for submission. All I need to do is proofread one last time, this time checking carefully for the more minor editing issues: typos, spelling/grammar errors, inelegant sentence structure, etc. I then make sure I’ve formatted everything as the publisher requires, and add in my cover page with the relevant details.

The bottle of bubbly stage

Hooray – I have my final draft ready for submission! Oh yes, just the minor issue of a submission cover letter and a draft blurb. Look out for more on those next month :)